I Spent 9 Years Creating the Perfect Way to Introduce Characters

Bookfox March 6, 2025
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I'm John Matthew Fox of Bookfox and I help authors write better fiction. Authors who worked with me have been published by Random House, sold more than 100,000 copies, and received Kirkus Starred Reviews. I've also taught writing at Chapman University and the University of Southern California (USC). I'm the author of two books, "I Will Shout Your Name" (Press 53) and my nonfiction book for writers: "The Linchpin Writer: Crafting Your Novel's Key Moments" You can take 10 writing courses from me with Bookfox Academy (link below). You can also join my coaching program, Bookfox Lab, which offers weekly feedback on your writing, provides one-on-one mentorship, and guides you through the process of writing your book. (link below)

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In this video I'll highlight some common mistakes when introducing characters, as well as giving you my 8 step-process for how to introduce a character well. COACHING: Join my coaching program for writers, BOOKFOX LAB: https://thejohnfox.com/bookfox-lab/ COURSES: Use my 10 courses in Bookfox Academy, with 230+ videos, to write your novel: https://thejohnfox.com/writing-courses/ EMAILS: Get emails about writing from me: https://thejohnfox.com/subscribe/ MY BOOK: Buy my book, "The Linchpin Writer": https://amzn.to/3U5ul14 Timeline: 0:00 Intro 0:50 Make Them Do Something 2:10 Make Them Say Something 3:43 Show Your Character’s Problem 4:53 Characterize Them Through Description 6:45 Choose Exactly the Right Spot 8:00 Opposite of Their Narrative Arc 8:53 Avoiding Common Introduction Mistakes 10:46 How to do Reintroductions