Bad Dialogue vs Good Dialogue ROUND 5 (Writing Advice)

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Explore five new types of bad dialogue and learn how to fix them. Examples from Jurassic World, Star Wars, Game of Thrones, Superman, and more! **Get Brandon's writing guide book STORY MADE SIMPLE** Amazon (Ad Link): https://amzn.to/4kv5TkU Barnes & Noble: https://tinyurl.com/4afd4nz6 Other Retailers: https://books2read.com/storymadesimple Patreon Page: https://www.patreon.com/WriterBrandonMcNulty YouTube Membership: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UChqAmyhEejCMMIxJmvUrdYw/join Get Brandon's horror/thriller novel The Half Murders: - AMAZON (Ad Link): https://amzn.to/4amlFKG - BARNES & NOBLE: https://shorturl.at/acwLX - AUDIBLE: https://shorturl.at/goFG9 - OTHER RETAILERS: https://books2read.com/TheHalfMurders Get Brandon's horror/thriller novel BAD PARTS: - AMAZON (Ad Link): https://amzn.to/3esTFYC - BARNES & NOBLE: https://tinyurl.com/BadPartsBN - AUDIBLE: https://www.audible.com/pd/Bad-Parts-Audiobook/B08CXNY2RF - OTHER RETAILERS: https://books2read.com/badparts Get Brandon's supernatural thriller novel ENTRY WOUNDS: - AMAZON (Ad Link): https://amzn.to/2XL737v - BARNES & NOBLE: https://tinyurl.com/EntryWoundsBN - AUDIBLE: https://tinyurl.com/EWAudible - OTHER RETAILERS: https://books2read.com/EntryWounds NOTE: Some of my links are affiliate links, which means that if you click on one of the product links, I’ll receive a small commission. This helps support the channel and allows me to continue to make videos. This does not affect my review of products. All opinions are my own. Thanks for the support! Follow Brandon McNulty: WEBSITE (Join my mailing list!) - https://brandonmcnulty.com/ TWITTER - https://twitter.com/McNultyFiction FACEBOOK - https://www.facebook.com/McNultyFiction/ SUBSCRIBE to Writer Brandon McNulty here: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UChqAmyhEejCMMIxJmvUrdYw?sub_confirmation=1 #dialogue #WritingAdvice #WritingTips #Writing #author #betterstories #authortube #booktube #authortuber #howtowrite #BrandonMcNulty #WriterBrandonMcNulty #WritingCommunity #movie #movies 0:00 Intro 0:39 What Good Dialogue Does 4:33 Bad Dialogue vs Good Dialogue 4:45 Product Placement Dialogue 5:04 Bad Example 1 - Jurassic World 6:21 Good Example 1 - Jurassic World Rebirth 7:46 Mind Reading Dialogue 8:09 Bad Example 2 - Superman IV: The Quest for Peace 9:34 Good Example 2 - Game of Thrones S5 E4 11:57 Soap Opera Dialogue 12:22 Bad Example 3 - General Hospital S62 E153 14:35 Good Example 3 - Suits S4 E15 16:34 Style Gone Stupid Dialogue 16:56 Bad Example 4 - Star Wars Episode II Attack of the Clones 19:20 Good Example 4 - Game of Thrones S2 E1 20:27 Convenient Outburst 21:05 Bad Example 5 - Spider-Man 2002 22:44 Good Example 5 - Peacemaker S1 E7 24:23 Clumsy Callback 25:03 Bad Example 6 - Star Wars Episode III Revenge of the Sith 26:38 Good Example 6 - Raiders of the Lost Ark 27:57 Outro ======================================= CHECK OUT MY OTHER VIDEOS: Mastering Scene Structure: https://youtu.be/012OMrKp85M Writing Scenes that Flow: https://youtu.be/rGqR3Oj61yo 5 Fatal Mistakes that New Writers Make https://youtu.be/_2mYh1-33-Y 5 Time-Saving Tips for Writers (And Readers!) https://youtu.be/z-Hjg70clbw 5 Scientific Inaccuracies in Movies, TV, & Books https://youtu.be/MeaamwDwg9w The BEST Writing Exercise Out There https://youtu.be/nHXprJhiqzs How to Write a Book Pitch https://youtu.be/4paxjmDoXIw Writing Villains #1 - Start with Your Hero https://youtu.be/IVcy-_FkPJI Writing Villains #2 - Goals https://youtu.be/_1lmtZQr8RY Writing Villains #3 - Motivation https://youtu.be/tJH78C3nKvg Writing Villains #4 - When to Introduce Your Villain https://youtu.be/FCzs0tuWICY Writing Villains #5 - Plot Points for Villains https://youtu.be/IKuZjpPVxak Writing Villains #6 - Impacting the Hero https://youtu.be/XmHLiFlfqNY The Anatomy of Story REVIEW: https://youtu.be/IWxdj9rKCu8 Save the Cat Writes a Novel REVIEW: https://youtu.be/w-5x0QFUc4w =======================================