116 Writers Sent Me Their Magic System Ideas (Best Wins $1,000)

Jed Herne โ€ข September 30, 2023
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Jed Herne

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Helping you write better fantasy books ๐Ÿง™ On this channel, I share the best fantasy writing advice that I've learned from publishing four novels and a video game. My books include Kingdom of Dragons, The Thunder Heist, Across the Broken Stars, and Fires of the Dead. I also wrote Siege of Treboulain (an interactive fantasy novel published by Choice of Games). Through my classes and programs, I've worked with 200+ fantasy writers to help them improve their stories. This has given me a lot of insight into the most common struggles that new fantasy writers face. I run this channel to share my learnings. Want to join my accountability and support community for fantasy writers? Then click the first link down below ๐Ÿ‘‡

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I ran a contest to find the best fantasy magic ideas, and here's what happened... Apply for my Fantasy Outlining Bootcamp: http://jedherne.com/outline โฒ๏ธ TIMESTAMPS: 00:00 - Introduction 00:09 - Round 1 10:58 - Round 2 14:10 - Round 3 29:30 - The Last Round โœ๏ธ MY FREE WRITING ADVICE BOOK: Get my free book: '5 Lessons That Transformed My Writing': https://jedherne.com/lessons ๐Ÿš€ BUILD BETTER WRITING HABITS: Join my Easy Writing Habits course: https://easywritinghabits.com/ ๐Ÿ’Œ MY NEWSLETTER: Get a free fantasy story when you sign up to my free, fortnightly author newsletter: https://bit.ly/jednewsletter ๐Ÿ“™ MY BOOKS: Across the Broken Stars: https://jedherne.com/acrossthebrokenstars The Thunder Heist: https://jedherne.com/thethunderheist/ Fires of the Dead: https://jedherne.com/firesofthedead ๐ŸŽฎ MY VIDEO GAME: Siege of Treboulain: https://www.choiceofgames.com/siege-of-treboulain/ ๐Ÿ”จ MY FAVOURITE WRITING TOOLS: Freewrite Traveller (distraction-free writing laptop): https://getfreewrite.com/?rstr=6485 - use this affiliate link for a 5% discount. MailerLite (best email newsletter software for authors): https://www.mailerlite.com/a/awmq7yimghg9 ProWritingAid (editing software that helped a lot with my early books): https://prowritingaid.com/?afid=4301 ๐Ÿง‘ ABOUT ME: Hi! My name's Jed. I'm a fantasy author with three published novels and a bestselling video game. On this channel, I draw from my 10+ years of writing experience to help you become a better writer. ๐Ÿ’ฌ CONNECT WITH ME: Follow me on Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/jedherne/ Send me an email: jed(at)jedherne.com (Note: I don't always get a chance to reply to every email. However, I do my best to read as many of them as possible, and it's my preferred method of communication.)

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