🌸 how to write ‘prettier’ prose and elevate your writing + free vocabulary list
Lynn D. Jung
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Hello! I'm Lynn, a fantasy and sci-fi writer. This is a space for me to share my writing journey and some of the lessons I've learned along the way. I hope you enjoy your stay! My debut adult fantasy novel, MOTHSBLOOD comes out fall 2026 from Bloomsbury US and Del Rey UK! Business Inquiries: [email protected] Rep: Laura Crockett @Triada US Literary ✨✨✨
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If you find this video helpful, please consider tipping me on ko-fi! ✨https://ko-fi.com/lynndjung​​​​​ hey guys! today i wanted to discuss a topic that's been on my mind a LOT lately (ever since I started working on my literary-leaning adult fantasy book...) - elevating your prose! here are a lot of little tips I've picked up and issues I've noticed in my own writing. as I mentioned in the video, these are mostly based off of personal experience and my preferences when it comes to prose, so your mileage may vary! my only aim is to potentially help jog something in your brain or give you some guidance if you've run into similar issue while writing. thank you for watching :) ✨ free vocabulary list https://docs.google.com/document/d/1jrZMS6ZWlL_X66qFW0W3dJfRa_00Xk4AgOk_ejwYN1Y/edit?usp=sharing ✨ timestamps 0:00 - title 0:07 - intro 1:22 - why i’m speaking (mostly) from personal experience today 1:33 - issues i’ve seen in my writing 4:15 - caveats 4:48 - #1: what does ‘bad’ prose look like? 5:29 - good prose goes beyond the line level! 5:59 - bad prose sin list 11:46 - fixing prose issues ✨ music Music by Lofi Breno - Elegance - https://thmatc.co/?l=93E5DFF2 ✨ links: travel writings: https://wherethehellami.blog website: https://lynndjung.com/​​​​​​ instagram: https://www.instagram.com/lynndjung/?hl=en kofi: https://ko-fi.com/lynndjung​​​​​ ✨ contact me: [email protected] ✨ tags: authortube, booktube, writing, writer, science fiction, creative writing, short stories, speculative fiction, fantasy writer, fantasy books, write with made, let's write, story ideas, book ideas, writing inspiration, writing advice, how to write, prose, purple prose, free writing resource
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